Schliefer's critique for the 11 secondclub winner
he instantly noticed that the character wasn't breathing, especially with the audio making such huge gasps.
he wanted a slight movement on the head at the frame where the hand contacts it, to show the contact and pull better.
he talked about the fact that a slight eye shift with in 8 frames is enough to feel like thought is occuring. Just a slight change in direction of pupils, and slight change in shape of the brows. Also make sure brows stay connected, if one moves far, the other needs to point to it a little bit so they feel attached by flesh.
breathing, solid touching, thought with eye shifts
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